write that book
This 7-day retreat gifts you the time, space, and instruction needed to revitalize your writing. Write that Book is open to all genders. Your retreat experience will be tailored to where you're at in your writing process. More info to come.
During our week together, we’ll begin each morning with a nourishing meditation and a delicious, healthy breakfast. After we are focused and oriented, we’ll set our individual writing goal for the day. Allison and Jessie will provide proven writing exercises designed to help you release writing blocks, organize your time, and find your motivation, with a special focus on the craft of writing a novel.
Your afternoon is free to structure as you wish. Write on your own, receive individual coaching, take an inspiring hike through town or the countryside, swim in the pool or the sea, people watch, schedule a massage, nap. Listen to your body and heart. We’ll come back together at night to share insight and laughter.
All participants will be shown how to:
- Write memorable characters
- Build a page-turning plot
- Create cinematic, multi-purpose settings
- Craft a scene
- Pull it all together using a neat and sweet 7-step method
- Edit efficiently and effectively
- Find an agent or self-publish
- Organize their writing time to finish a novel in less than a year
DAY TWO FOCUS
SELECT A NOVEL-WORTHY IDEA, FINISH YOUR BOOK IN UNDER A YEAR
Using the unique starting point of accessing the recurring themes in your life to produce dynamic fiction, Day 2 covers:
- a simple yet powerful model for sifting through your crucible moments to select the one robust enough to sustain a novel
- how to strengthen this novel idea, including adding depth as well as subplots to your existing idea
- the “Use Your Good Stuff Now; Your Brain Will Make More,” and “Write to One Person” rules of writing and life
- a plan for discovering and refining your writer’s voice
- examples of how successful writers transformed their defining moments into the seeds of bestselling fiction.
Once you've selected your novel idea, you'll be shown the proven 7-step method for going from idea to completed novel in less than a year.
DAY THREE FOCUS
CRAFTING COMPELLING CHARACTERS
From Agatha Christie’s Miss Marple to William Goldman's Inigo Montoya, character is arguably the most memorable element of a novel. How do you create a full-realized unique protagonist that leaps from the page? How should you develop secondary characters as well as the protagonist’s nemesis? Day 3 will challenge you to eliminate cardboard characterizations and create something new and fresh.
DAY FOUR FOCUS
Since Aristotle, the three-act structure for storytelling has reigned supreme, but does it still hold true for modern writers? Is it the best way, or the only way, to tell your tale? Is plotting simply sequencing your scenes or is there more to it? Day 4 will teach you the art of plotting so your manuscript will attract the attention it deserves.
DAY FIVE FOCUS
SETTING AND EDITING
“I guess God made Boston on a wet Sunday,” Raymond Chandler once said, and this seemingly tossed-off remark has much to teach us about the gentle arts of setting and description. Day 6 will guide you through the process and potential pitfalls of choosing a setting, and explore the ways in which descriptive passages can be honed to illuminate characters and themes. Then, we will immerse ourselves in meta editing (“re-seeing” your work to deepen and strengthen the writing) as well as nuts and bolts line editing, including introducing the ARISE (action, romance and humor, information, suspense, and emotion) method for evaluating the strength of your scenes.
DAY SIX FOCUS
Millions of books are published each year. Want yours to be one of those, or are you simply curious as to how a manuscript becomes a published book? Day 6 gives you the behind-the-scenes of the publishing world. Snap-, self-, and traditional publishing are covered.
Commit to finally writing that book with the aid of expert instruction. At Write That Book, you'll work with master instructors who value laughter, creativity, and community, explore the world with a fun-loving community of creatives, and enjoy a relaxing, inspiring vacation rooted in creative expression. Email Jess Lourey at email@example.com if you have a time and place you'd like to see this workshop offered.
"Jess Lourey is a rare double talent. She is an outstanding writer. Just as remarkable is Jess’ ability to teach writing to others. She clearly communicates the essence of good writing — whether it is giving a novice writer broad guidance on how to structure a novel or write sentences that grab the reader’s attention, or working with experienced writers on the fine art of wordsmithing to improve elements of pace, suspense or character development."
— Stephen T., Write That Book, July 2015
“When I signed up for Jessica Lourey ’s fiction writing workshop, I was at a low point. I was stuck. I longed to write a novel, but I didn’t know where to begin. I didn’t think I had any stories worth telling. Jess helped me realize that I have a lifetime of experiences just waiting to be tapped into, a lifetime of stories, characters, settings and plot twists. Anyone can teach the mechanics of writing, but not anyone can inspire like Jess.”
— Tina M., Rewrite Your Life, November 2016
Dates, Times & Locations
More info to come.
More info to come.
1:00 pm Lunch and Welcome
9:00-12 Selecting and Refining a Novel-worthy Idea; Poise Yourself to Finish Your Book in Less than a Year
1:00 Writing on your own. You can also schedule a 1:1 session with Jess or Allison to get vision/voice feedback.
5:00 Community support session: share your daily progress, get encouragement and feedback
7:00 Dinner in the village, with fellow retreaters or alone, you decide